Thursday, March 29, 2007

Broken Record

It is hard to keep a connection going especially when we live in a disconnected connected world. Many has enjoyed the sweet melody spun out from various connection strings, some of us are enjoying it, while for some of us, well, it is a case of listening to the sound from a broken record... It is SHIT! And it goes like this...

How many times do we have to try
How many times do we have to cry
Staying up all night trying to figure it out
How did this flame got burned out
Why do we argue and always shout
Making all those sweet feelings go south
How many times many times do we have to feel this pain
It is like a game with no gain
We've played it out so many time
And at every time it is never fine
Why do we feel like a broken record that can never play right
Leaving us broken hearted with sleepless night

We are left with questions why
Why did all those moment fly
What exactly didn't we try
Now the well of love is all dry
All gone to our eyes as tears when we cry
Does it matter if we feel all vulnerable
We can cater to us and make it all memorable
We can create a future that is all favourable
Lets carry on carry on because we have to be fine
We've played it out so many time
But this time it taste like bad wine
Why do we feel like a broken record that can never play right
Leaving us broken hearted with sleepless night.



Blogger Chameleon said...


March 29, 2007 3:19 AM  
Blogger Idemili said...

Chameleon: So? LOL

Ola: Ahhhhh, who you missing?

March 29, 2007 6:20 AM  
Blogger Moments said...

Awwwwwww............ this is so beautiful.... I'm so taken over when it comes to poems especially love poems lol...

Truth be told, who are you really missing.
I confess that I'm going to copy this poem off your blog and save it up somewhere :-)

I absolutely love it.

March 29, 2007 7:19 AM  
Blogger Ms zee said...

now tell me who [done] break my poor babe heart???

To make him rave and rant
about good wine going bad
and people going south

who [done] break my poor babe heart
to make him have sleepless nights thinking how he killed the fire and let it go out of sight

who [done] break my poor babe heart... tell me who [done] break my poor babe heart...

March 29, 2007 3:33 PM  
Blogger adumaadan - Blacktinkerbell said...

I don't know what it is about love that gives it power to rob our eyes of sleep. I don't know, will never understand...this is pretty good by the way. Remember our conversation about your writing?

March 30, 2007 1:17 AM  
Blogger dolly said...

.......really nice

March 30, 2007 5:04 AM  
Blogger omohemi Benson said...

Nice poem.

March 30, 2007 5:12 AM  
Blogger UnNaked Soul said...

thanks everyone... he he he

March 30, 2007 6:41 AM  
Blogger JJ said...

Very nice and true.

March 30, 2007 8:28 AM  
Blogger Vera Ezimora said...

UnNaked, what's wrong baby? You know you can talk 2 me. Don't worry about it being very small; it will grow some day...hopefully. I have already started researching the best ways to increase the size; I can only imagine your frustration with ur nephew almost pulling it out thinking it was a brown french fry. Pele o, my brotha. Life isn't fair. Some people get the lil ones and others get the big ones. But where were you when God was distributing the big ones? You sef, nawa o.


That being said, I like ur write-up. It really is a disconnected connected world. I replied ur comments on both posts on my blog. You're gonna like my replies. *wink*

March 30, 2007 10:35 AM  
Blogger Waffarian said...

Bros oh bros e be like say woman matter dey hala you for dat side!abeg, try sleep small, i get ogogoro if you need help! hehehehehehehh!

March 31, 2007 2:29 AM  
Blogger UnNaked Soul said...

@vera: LOL... you dey try me oh! no let me loose my nuts on you oh! you're life might never be the same again oh. my koko will drive you wild oh. no try me oh. i don yan oh...

you see the way I dey put oh for the end of all my sentence? connect the dots... *wink*

Over to your blog.

@waffarian: LOL! I need a rub on my head and a gentle whisper in my ear... can you do that? :-D

April 02, 2007 4:10 AM  
Blogger omohemi Benson said...

Please update!

April 02, 2007 6:08 AM  
Blogger Moments said...

Episode 2 is finally out oh! :-))

How you dey and where have you been??


April 02, 2007 6:26 AM  
Blogger Simply Gorgeous said...

My poor Unnaked... Who has broken that your unnaked heart??

April 02, 2007 6:50 AM  
Blogger Idemili said...


I will release rats into your life!LOL

April 02, 2007 7:01 AM  
Blogger Lyrically speaking said...

I don't mind at all feeling vulnerable, but when heartache taste like bad wine then that's a problem. Great post! Very profound.

April 02, 2007 11:43 AM  
Blogger stuck in my throat o said...

very well written.

April 03, 2007 2:40 AM  
Blogger adumaadan - Blacktinkerbell said...

hey, you this unnaked person. What's the matter with you? where have you been? and who the heck is this sexy lawyer? I'm the only sexy lawyer allowed in your life o. Anyways, have you seen the ad on my blog? Please direct correct persons to apply. thank you.

April 03, 2007 8:40 AM  
Blogger UnNaked Soul said...

@OB: yes ma! lol

@moments: I dey oh my sister... am getting all mushy these days...

@SG: am fine oh... just my imagination ;-)

@idemili: LOL... o yea?

LS: thanks babe *wink*

SIMTO: thanks dear... :-)

@tinkerbell: LOL... there's this sexy lawyer that... i no yan again... he he he... seen you post... but you say i no fit apply now...

April 03, 2007 10:55 AM  

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