Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Monolove

Mystery is the chemical that preserves anything dipped into it for enternity - unNaked Soul

Many found happiness in your playground, and many sadness
How is it possible?
Could this be you?
An entity with multiple personality
Could this be you?
As much as I tell to myself the possibility, you are too sweet to be two.

I can't but help to admire the colours of your garment
Made from a million and one beautiful thoughts
Perfectly seamed with the threads of time
Embroidered with beads of innocence
No wonder many fall into your embrace without a second thought
I wonder who made you that dress
I want one too
Heavy, you say?
How come something so beautiful be so heavy?
Oh really?
The heart grows to fit in?

The drama you bring sets you at the center stage of the world
At the center of everyone's heart
The molten core of every solid feelings
You are soft yet solid on the surface
Permit me to reach your depth and be engulfed in the warmth of your center
To explode with desires and be reborn as a solid representation of your beauty.

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38 Comments:

Blogger desperate lady said...

Hmmmmmm who inspired dis post Mr UnNaked? Very lovely post.......I like a lot.
U can win ma heart anyday with this post.

February 27, 2008 3:33 PM  
Blogger desperate lady said...

N I was 1st and now I'm 2nd.

February 27, 2008 3:34 PM  
Blogger UnNaked Soul said...

You inspired this post. :-)

For cumin 1st & 2nd, you'll get a _____

February 27, 2008 3:41 PM  
Blogger desperate lady said...

I inspired the post? Hmm u flatter me my dear but I shall not be deceived......thanks though.

I'll get a what?.....ummm fuck? Orgasm? What?

February 27, 2008 3:49 PM  
Blogger UnNaked Soul said...

this isn't flattery my dear. best believe this.

what would u want from the list you gave?

February 27, 2008 3:53 PM  
Blogger desperate lady said...

Good question......now everyone needs both, I don't want a fuck without an orgasm n its impossible to get an orgasm without a fuck. Now back to ur question...........hmmm wut do u think? I'd leave d@ 4 u to answer.
Beside u didn't ans ma question, I'll get a ???????

February 27, 2008 3:59 PM  
Blogger UnNaked Soul said...

You'll get both plus breakfast in bed... *wink*

February 27, 2008 4:03 PM  
Blogger Desy said...

beautiful...

are ya'll gonna 'comment fuck' cause i'll prepare the popcorn just in case...lol

blog love- can't get enuff of it...

February 27, 2008 8:18 PM  
Blogger Olamild said...

I waz here

February 28, 2008 5:06 AM  
Blogger Today's ranting said...

hmmmmmm really nice.

February 28, 2008 10:00 AM  
Blogger Queen of My Castle said...

Such a beautiful post. I'm in awe. I loved the accompanying quote as well.

February 28, 2008 2:58 PM  
Blogger Afrobabe said...

wow...my man has gone all deep oh...does this mean u dont have horny thoughts anymore?

February 29, 2008 6:49 AM  
Blogger ibiluv said...

surreal

February 29, 2008 7:43 AM  
Blogger Fo said...

i was gon say i knw who this poems/posts dedicated too ....but y'al said it urselves in five thosand nd ten words...*winks

February 29, 2008 7:57 AM  
Blogger 1stpet2v9 said...

ahhhhhhhhhhhh UnNaked????? is this how u r treating me b/c i am not in ur vicinity again?????

desperate lady inspired this?? oya, where is d one I inspired???

syke.. i joke.... lovely piece buddie, niccee

February 29, 2008 8:35 AM  
Blogger Bold and Beautiful said...

Nice......

February 29, 2008 10:42 AM  
Blogger James Tubman said...

ok

March 02, 2008 12:53 PM  
Blogger princesa said...

So you are in love for real this bad boy?!?!
Lucky DL!

Like the poem(is it??).

March 03, 2008 5:37 AM  
Blogger Ms. emmotions said...

DL AND uNnaked has lost it i declare..

now this post makes the word love so special, awwwww,

hesssssssssssssssssssssssss issssss innnnnnnn luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

March 03, 2008 8:32 AM  
Blogger fantasy queen said...

sweetly deep....love it.

March 03, 2008 8:39 AM  
Blogger Zephi Fahrenheit said...

DL an Unnaked pls get a room..thanks!.lol

March 03, 2008 9:00 AM  
Blogger Naija Chickito said...

Different. Makes me think. I like.

March 04, 2008 12:23 AM  
Blogger plastiQ said...

Hmnn. Love in Blogville. Between two very dynamic bloggers...Hmnn,
Hey DL, you can get an orgasm without a f**k.
But I'm sure you'll find that out from UnNaked. He seems like a master of the art. Guy, try and open a school/institution men...

March 05, 2008 9:35 AM  
Blogger Sasuke said...

men nice post. first time here
feeling the poetry, whoever you wrote it for must have gotten you lovestoned.

impeccable expressions could learn a thing or two.

LOL@ for cumin first-unnaked you definately have a way with words..Bad guy..lol

March 06, 2008 1:45 AM  
Blogger wellsbaba said...

i havnt fully comprehended dis post i gotta read it again but i must say its deep n thought provokin!.....im new2bloggin u cud check mine out2
wellsbaba.blogspot.com

March 06, 2008 4:59 AM  
Blogger Queen of My Castle said...

UnNaked, where are you luv? We're missing ya.

March 06, 2008 2:20 PM  
Blogger SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

Okay, I have proven in the past to fail miserably at poetry. But after reading everyone else's comments, I know I am on the right track. Thus, this was nice.

Thanks for swinging by Nigerian Curiosity. Don't be a stranger.

NIGERIAN CURIOSITY
IT WAS SO MUCH EASIER WHEN I ONLY HAD ONE...

March 06, 2008 3:40 PM  
Blogger SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

Do I get a prize for being the 27th (and 28th) commenter? lol!

NIGERIAN CURIOSITY
IT WAS SO MUCH EASIER WHEN I ONLY HAD ONE...

March 06, 2008 3:40 PM  
Blogger Risquediva said...

uhmmm..do i see a connection btw DL n u...well nice post love...

March 06, 2008 3:51 PM  
Blogger Honeywell said...

sweet! I'm wondering who/ what inspired this... But i am sure we won't ever know.... *sigh*

March 06, 2008 9:55 PM  
Blogger Overwhelmed Naija Babe said...

i think i have to re-read... i was sure i understood it till i got to the middle

March 07, 2008 4:32 AM  
Blogger desperate lady said...

@Unnaked-babes i'm fine now, a lil headache.

@Plastiq-U no be better person o, shey u were spose to load ur phone n call me back dat day?, instead u came n left this comment of urs*sighs*......lol ur ass was broke right?
i'll holla l8r.

March 07, 2008 5:28 AM  
Blogger plastiQ said...

@ DL, i knew you wuld chew me to bits. Me, broke? Haven't you heard that my father owns National Stadium and Third Mainland bridge and I haven't even spoken of NEPA/PHCN o. I would have called back but the Arsenal Championship match came on...I'm sure you will understand. UnNaked,abeg this conversation na based on some kain church matter o...lol.

March 07, 2008 6:14 AM  
Blogger Ms. Catwalq said...

ooooooooooh, now I have to think as I read the post. what kind of wahala is this now? ehn?

Unnaked, u r freaking me out o. u r going through another "reflective phase and I don't like it.

In simple English, what is this about?

March 07, 2008 8:57 AM  
Blogger cally-waffybabe said...

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March 09, 2008 12:09 PM  
Blogger anonymous gal said...

beautiful

March 10, 2008 7:39 AM  
Blogger Uzezi said...

u no that sound u make after drinking very hot pepper soup? that is the sound i am making.
nice one

March 11, 2008 8:41 AM  
Blogger Uzezi said...

u no that sound u make after drinking very hot pepper soup? that is the sound i am making.
nice one

March 11, 2008 8:41 AM  

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